Somnambulists Need Not Apply

Instead of this:

"As executives and managers, our role includes ensuring that the public service is representative," Mr. Marshall said in the memo. "This involves providing direction and leadership by example, and demonstrating a firm commitment to an inclusive workplace."

I would like to see this:

"As executives and managers, our role includes ensuring that the public service is efficient," Mr. Marshall said in the memo. "This involves providing direction and leadership for results, and demonstrating a firm commitment to an effective workplace."